Hey Phil, i am well under way with my essay, i have done all the necessary research, gathered all my quotes, drafted a quick plan and have wrote the introduction and opening paragraph to my main body which is a brief description of Saving Private Ryan. But i do need some help refining it. I have 1,259 words in just this information and have god knows how many quotes.
Are you in tomorrow? if so could you have a quick look, or i could email what i have so far to you and you can tell me what you think there.