Okay, so here's the storyboard of the original story in which i have gone back to. For this story i have decided to keep it simple, so i think the plain white background with the black lines works very well.
This is the story of the Bilious Spinning Top, the spinning top is just a child fresh out the box and is about to experience its first spin. All doesn't go to plan for the little one when he fails twice to make himself spin, but alas on the third spin he gets the hang of it. The spinning top soon gets dizzy form his first spin which leaves his first spinning expericene with a bad end with him heaving as though he is going to throw up.